With the increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Electronic devices are now dramatically developed and widely used. As a result, a lot of works which were once done by human is now performed by machines. These trends are bringing us not only advantages but disadvantages as well.
People's work never has done by modern techniques as much as it is today. First of all, using machines consumes less time than doing the work ourselves. A lot of works such as paperworks at the office, medical checkings in hospital are done by electronic machines. Secondly, machines work more effectively than human does. Engines can create or produce thousands of products that are completely the same and faster than human worker, which factories require. In addition, machines are not tired or sick, they only break down after a long time being used, we just need to fix them.
On the other hand, some machines are too expensive for us to buy. Furthermore, performing too much work by machines leads to bad effects. Not working for a long time, human can become lazy and no longer want to do anything. In the future, we may depend on machines too much that we cannot live without them.
In conclusion, technical devices, howewer, are created by human so it is possible to say human can be perfectly replaced by machines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, may, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81566820276 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63434903848 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622119815668 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8441057766 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6428571429 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21407248169 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074934914157 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531390029267 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118498753511 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799099213078 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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