International air fares are falling and tourism is growing. What are advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity ?

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Travel refresh mind and soul.In the burgeoning era, where people are wo...
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...eoning era, where people are working for ,long hours and under stress.So in order ...
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...ess.So in order To refresh and incursion,they travel to different places frequently.S...
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...y travel to different places frequently.So tourism is growing at a swift pace.This...
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...y.So tourism is growing at a swift pace.This essay will outline the merits and demer...
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...merits and demerits of this approach. Increased tourism has plethora of reason...
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... of reasons for downfall of air tickets.To begin with, travel give opportunity for...
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...unity for exchange of culture and ideas.When variety of ideas will mix with each oth...
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...ariety of ideas will mix with each other,it would results in change of living stand...
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...ideas will mix with each other,it would results in change of living standards,thoughts ...
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...and different approach towards the life.Secondly,tourism will increase employment opport...
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...erent approach towards the life.Secondly,tourism will increase employment opportunities ...
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...ies to the people of destination places.In this contest visitors spend money on sh...
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...t-seeing and various leisure activities.So all these jobs will be managed by nativ...
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...ly will boost the economy of the nation.Hospitality industry,foreign exchange department wi...
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...onomy of the nation.Hospitality industry,foreign exchange department will take the econo...
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...ill take the economy on developing path.For any instance nations lie Singapore,Duba...
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...ingapore,Dubai and Malaysia are heavily depend upon tourism business. Moreover this wi...
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...e heavily depend upon tourism business. Moreover this will help in maintaining harmoniou...
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... help in maintaining harmonious relation nations and would boost trade among coun...
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...and would boost trade among countries On the flip side,it has adverse effect t...
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... among countries On the flip side,it has adverse effect too,unwanted tourism...
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...e disputes and conflicts between people.Moreover this will disturb the peace of a countr...
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...his will disturb the peace of a country.Legal activities are the result of movement o...
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... people from one place to another place.Even theses activities would create discrimi...
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...ould create discrimination among people.For an instance a survey has been conducted...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91803278689 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51317968086 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647540983607 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.2975951904 399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.273701607 49.4020404114 405% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 481.333333333 106.682146367 451% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.3333333333 20.7667163134 392% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 7.06120827912 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11977632728 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769416274781 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231189330016 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787181001045 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266700045195 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.1 13.0946893788 360% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -27.66 50.2224549098 -55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.2 11.3001002004 329% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.24 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.61 8.58950901804 158% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.1190380762 340% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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