International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages
Nowadays, the tourists are spending less and less money for their journey around the world . Especially, in some countries , the global travel industry is considered as an essential source of economic growth. I believe the positive effects of this phenomenon far outweigh its negative ones.
Let’s begin by looking at the advantages of encouraging tourism by low-cost aspect . Firstly , it is clear that the number of international travellers experimented an incredible rise due to the decrease in travel cost that brings a significant income for some countries which tourism is their lifeblood. For instance, by 2018 , the travel and tourism made up for 10 percentage of GDP in Vietnam . Secondly , a developing travel industry could reduce social problems such as unemployment , poverty…For example, in tourist attractions , it is necessary that the safety is ensured resulting in the increase in the number of securities that creates employments for local people. In addition, promoting the development of tourism is an efficient method to advertise image of country to people over the world.
Turning to the other side of the argument, several countries are suffering from adverse effects on the increasing in the quantity of international visitors . The most severe result is that the nature are being deteriorated by the growing number of visitors. The more the visitors the country welcomes , the more consumptions the country need to ensure, possible food , means of transportation , accommodations . Therefore, a range of activities is conducted in an effort to meet requirements of tourists which is harmful to environment such as deforestation , building a lot of industries .
In conclusion, there are clearly positives and negatives to supporting the travel industry. While the increasing in visitors contribute to the rise of nation’s income, the nature could be harmed in this process . it is expected that countries will have proper solutions in term of promoting the travel industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56634304207 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19559475091 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2229963515 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233681570687 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688822142508 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503868677027 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123592140336 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304579023892 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.