The Internet has become an inevitable part of our life. However, it has led to some dramatic changes in terms of how the information is distributed and accessed by it.
This essay will explore about these two problems and changes which might have resulted for the same and will also propose solutions which might address them.
One of the concerns of sharing information is, that the data is vulnerable to theft because it is stored electronically rather than physically. So, it is easy for any person who infiltrates a website to steal any kind of personal information. Moreover, we come across a lot of online robberies rather than physical robberies. The possible solution for this could be that the companies which ask for personal data should install strict anti-hacking software to avoid security breaches.
Turning on the other concern of consuming information, earlier we used to rely on established newspapers for the information which was authenticated. However, nowadays we prefer the internet despite the fact that anyone can post any information on the internet and people trust that falsehood data and share it which leads to miss-informing the public. This problem could be mitigated if social network websites hire fact-checkers who would check the validity of the content which is available online and then allow it to be shared.
In conclusion, these two problems of the vulnerability of data and the proliferation of fake news can be solved if we have good anti-hacking software and hire fact-checkers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20491803279 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93317813919 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598360655738 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.045036853 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.454545455 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142251349163 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517212215391 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044391122194 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771454408113 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366994040199 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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