Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
give details of when you would be available for this work
Dear Sir,
Hope this letter finds you in pink of your health.
My name is David, I am a third-year student studying in city medical college. I am writing this letter in response to the advertisement you released yesterday, inviting people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. I hereby would like to express my sincere interest for the same.
I am keen to work with you at your hospital because as I have already mentioned that I am currently perusing my medical degree from the city medical college and I usually get free around 6 PM in the evening. For me this is a significant opportunity that I really didn't want to miss. And I strongly believe that this volunteering will definitely help me with my learning.
my field of study is general physician so I can assist you with general patients in the emergency ward. I am also good with blood pressure monitoring and handling little kids as well.
Hope my learning would be sufficient to help you with some of your work at the hospital.
Thanks for giving the letter your attentions.
Yours faithfully,
david
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ss my sincere interest for the same. I am keen to work with you at your hospit...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: PM_IN_THE_EVENING[1]
Message: Use simply 'PM'.
Suggestion: PM
...college and I usually get free around 6 PM in the evening. For me this is a significant opportuni...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...a significant opportunity that I really didnt want to miss. And I strongly believe th...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...efinitely help me with my learning. my field of study is general physician so ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68962153397 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597883597884 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3072075453 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361231688541 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125426987377 0.0766984524023 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127574981939 0.0603063233224 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18911762443 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11532038767 0.0580467560999 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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