A majority of youngsters have faced a professional's choice , making this question is acute to consider. Some people claim that the profession of a doctor is more essential than the profession of an inventor. From my perspective, probably, I agree with the opposite point of view, a creative person in large measure yields benefits than a doctor in peaceful countries, however, a doctor has the valuable meaning .
It seems undeniable that the challenging world reveals global ongoing issues which requires close attention, the main issues such as the global warming, a natural resources crisis, the population growth force people seriously react to the necessity of recreation of attitude to the surrounding environment, to consuming raw materials. According to these problems, it is obvious that creative specialists will be in demand, resulting in an increase in the demands for approaches which conserve minerals as well as equipments decreasing pollutions. By implementing these ideas, it is reasonable to develop technological industry. It , in reality , is the right solution because, for instance, last two decades, by using the Internet, the printing productions have been significantly reduced, since people have been opting for online reading, consequently, the deforestation’s scale is less compared to the past. As a result, the modern world exposes the acute problems, related to these issues , it would fair to conclude that a creator is more crucial in any peaceful society.
It is worth remarking that any society has to develop medicine, because new diseases emerge , and new drugs has to combat them, eradicating their existence. The medical professionals who are approved , honed skills are necessary to cure disease, maintain health well-being of population, because a sick person is not able to be creative. Therefore, any community reaps advantage by having doctors.
In conclusion, instead of using conventional methods of saving natural resources, environment, people have to invert new methods , approaches, to increase the productivity of devises which preserve environment. Thus, an inventor brings more merits than a doctor, nevertheless, a doctor also plays vital role.
- Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say– Congratulate your friend.– Ask when would be possible for you to visit.– Ask what present they would like. 56
- Some people say it is the government’s responsibility to fund school buses, while others think parents should be responsible for bringing their kids to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
- Some people think that not all criminals should be kept in prison. Some criminals should do unpaid work to help other people in the community. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? 84
- Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statement. 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58208955224 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18861948806 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617910447761 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3487122425 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.846153846 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0594954425561 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216623217063 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244015736095 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.038499055324 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322486830689 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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