A majority of people aim to reach financial independence, they search a variety of ways to become financially free. A large of proportion of people accumulate money, increasing own financial assets, some people reflect about the price of goods in the process of purchasing them. From my perspective, certainly, i agree with this proposition, however, sometimes a person has detrimental circumstance, such as physical injures, in this case, the price is invaluable when it concerns the pricy of treatment assisting the person to avoid injures.
It seems undeniable that no one has a desire to have a debt . Advertisements persuade people to buy a good or service, countless banks offer credit with high-interest rates, provoke people to take a loan. Consequently, numerous people borrow money, then they struggle to bring back the bank load . Nevertheless, according to the banking statistic, a large number of loaners have not been able to cope with the loans. The horrible burdens, obligations have been followed their lifeways. Others observe these experience, instead of sanking into debt , they prefer to avoid any debt, evaluating their abilities, predicting their future after borrowing money , they will acquire a good , if their credit card hold the required amount of money to pay for this good. Thus , compared to people who cope a good without thinking, these are consider price is essential, they carry out the copmprehensive market analysis, searching a adequate price of this good. Nowadays, for instance, a large proportion of people enjoy browsing the net to find appropriate product price . Therefore, some people escape unplesant situations which will be caused by borrowing money, these concentrate their attention on the retail price of the goods.
On the other hand, sometime individuals have unpredictable damage, illness which requests expensive treatments, medicine, drags, in this case, the harmful consequence should be prevented. In my opinion, a person should not consider the price of products or services because health is critical in this moment. Having a debt is more beneficial than being injured. As a result, people should not focus on a price when the question associates with their health.
In conclusion, certainly, a price of items are valuable to everyone because no one is not willing to fall in debt. But it is worth remarking that price means nothing when a person has some healthy issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28165374677 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93194559649 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0877985837 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.555555556 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179336486462 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579512249053 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508352116015 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113625362251 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251519265371 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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