It is believed that culture and tradition are lost when it is exposed for earning money. However, others believe it important part of promotion. Discuss and give your opinion.
Culture and tradition are the core of any culture but its exposure to outsiders to fulfill the greed for money, can kills the fundamental ideals and values of the culture, according to many people. On the other hand, others believe that it is essential for community development and exhibition of their culture. In my opinion, if people treat every culture with respect, inter cultural exposure can have several advantages to the society as whole.
To begin with, publicity of culture is extremely crucial in order to attract people and promote tourism, which can have significant impact on the locals. Not only it boost the local business but also improve the living standards and prosper the employment opportunities. Moreover, certain communities have been completely extinct because of their orthodox approach to preserve tradition by boycotting the world. Such communities could have been saved if people and governments were aware about their whereabouts. For instance, Naga tribes, in Andman Nikobar, was on the verge of extinction when they were discovered by Indian government. Now it is thriving under the protection of the government as authorities have employ strict rules to visit the tribes. In short, interaction and communication with other culture will surely have great positive outcomes.
However, there are several evidences in the past where such exposure has completely destroyed the originality. Human beings are tend to adapt changes in the surroundings so when they come in contact with people from other culture, they easily adopt their culture, destroying their own. Take for an example of Jesalmer, a town of Rajasthan in India, then famous for its ethnic wear, now people are hardly wearing cultural outfits after invasion by foreign tourists and their western clothes. Thus, exposure, sometimes, creates great deteriorating impact on the cultures.
In conclusion, although foreign culture exposure is considered as threat to local culture and tradition, it certainly has more advantages to offer than its downside. Thus, people should embrace the outside attraction and find a way to maintain their originality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'kill'
Suggestion: kill
...ers to fulfill the greed for money, can kills the fundamental ideals and values of th...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...icant impact on the locals. Not only it boost the local business but also improve the...
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Line 3, column 717, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'employed'.
Suggestion: employed
...n of the government as authorities have employ strict rules to visit the tribes. In sh...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...royed the originality. Human beings are tend to adapt changes in the surroundings so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in short, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44610778443 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79029226665 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601796407186 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6978969093 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159226046199 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490276392795 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506919679418 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995002714977 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690673771845 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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