It is difficult for people who live in cities to get enough physical exercise. What causes and solutions can be taken to solve the problem?
Nowadays, people living in urban towns are unable to do sufficient physical exercise by dint of many reasons, however this can be solved if proper steps are effectively taken.
To commence, people in the cities are starting their day with commutation in the early morning to schools or work and ending it by passing through heavy traffic congetion thus busy schedule is leaving no time for physical exercise. Eventhough if they manage to get some extra time then they spend it on some non essential activities like watching television, sticking to their mobile phones on social media or playing games on computers etc. Moreover, the open spaces in the cities are very limited due to which people are not getting enough room to perform physical activities like sports or outdoor exercise.
Nevertheless, there are several ways for urban resident to solve this problem such as government should identify few places in the city and develope them as sport facilities or walking tracks, so that people can utilise the same. Moreover, people should do proper time management thus allocate some time for physical activities and maintain their health well, for instance they can spare at least half an hour a day for walking or playing their favourite sports. Finally, there should be clubs or fitness centers who can arrange a competition with exciting prices for motivating people to participate.
In conclusion, busy schedule of people and less space in a cities are consequences, however it can be resolved by providing common space for physical activities, effective time management and stop spending time on non essential activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a city' or simply 'cities'?
Suggestion: a city; cities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19245283019 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66441283656 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.1174369082 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.0 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322036779439 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140983912877 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616427761735 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193267586874 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519166585174 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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