It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sports should be compulsory for all the students in the schools. What do you think?
Educational institutions play a pivotal role in building up a career of children by way of providing various academic and physical development education. Daily workout have a profound impact on the body therefore essential to be the part of everyday routine. This essay will discuss the numerous benefits of physical and sports activities and also the importance of these in school along with my positive opinion towards the step.
Nowadays, health issues are persistently increasing due to lack of exercise or physical workout. This problem can easily be noticed among the children ages 10 to 20 unlike earlier. These days children are overburdened by the syllabus and extra curriculum activities in school results in hard to manage time for their own body. So schools should make physical education compulsory to all the students in order to provide good physique and refreshing mind. In addition, teenagers engaged in sports activities perform well in academic areas as well because of the relaxed and healthy state of mind.
Secondly, school is the best place to learn coordination, teamwork and various sports activities. Not only this, some sports are all the rage for building up a career, for instance, Sachin Tendulkar is ideal for all youngsters. Also, several inter-school competition provides a platform for children to choose their career and accentuate their talents. Teenagers who are oblivious of the importance of physical education, schools help them to encourage and taking participation in activities.
To sum up, exercise and workout are crucial for a person's fitness hence should be part of daily life by way of compulsory subject in school for all the students. This essay discussed the innumerable benefits of physical education. In my opinion, indeed, it is quintessential to do exercise regularly and school should motivate children to be the part of it in different ways.
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Suggestion: parted
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32673267327 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92249768403 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8393250037 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308307111817 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959170169341 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749807881495 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192366878649 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622523711412 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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