In the past, people were lived together because of strong bonding in between family members. Whereas now, children’s, mother, father are living separately in order to study, earn money or some personal issues in their life. However, I strongly believe that every person of family can change this tendency with taking proper actions and guidance.
Over a period of decade, the economy and technology of the countries are developing which have become major cause to affecting the relationship between families. Nowadays, everyone running after the money to give a better life to their family with themself. For instance, people who are living in remote areas country like India, Pakistan, and Bangladesh migrated in big cities for getting good life style with handsome money. On the other side, teenagers became addicted to using social media like Facebook, Instagram. In this situation they do not spend much time to communicate with their family and which has created dramatically emotional gap between family members.
Nevertheless, we can change this situation with some useful tactics and decision making. As we all know families are very essential unit of society therefore family members should take some responsibilities to make better relationship between themselves. For instance, families should spend some quality time with their kids and try to know about their problems as a friend. Apart from that organizing social function really helpful for the families to come together and build strong relationship. Secondly, government should bring some business in remote cities which helps the families to getting jobs in their city. With these solutions we can build good relationship between families and bring them closer.
I personally believe that for a person, family is more important than anything. Work, friends, all other things come next. That is why people should take stand for their family and bring everyone closer in any kind of situation. “Families make society, society creates city and city build nation. Ultimately, Nations created by families.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: hamedpa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 352, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith taking proper actions and guidance. Over a period of decade, the economy and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44135802469 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66458502142 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5341262694 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7894736842 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182015147949 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618560660869 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043117371219 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116442470345 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289629624212 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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