As they say cleanliness is half faith. But it is mostly believed that the garbage pollution today is a worldwide conundrum. According to me the main causes are over population and excessive use of non degradable material. The question is what can be done about it? This essay shall elaborate the causes of rubbish made by people and how to take some measures to resolve these problem.
First cause of excessive waste is over population. Most of the people in rural area are the reason of unwanted waste, especially young ones hanging out with their peers in streets who are mostly found of throwing rubbish here and there. They eat and chat for hours without realizing the mess they are creating behind. They do not have a sense to dump their waste in proper bins. For instance, it has been observed around many areas people throwing wrappers out of their windows from moving vehicle. Moreover, several people are seen urinating in drains publically. By such ridiculous actions, what lessons are they leaving behind for the young generation? Secondly, use of plastic bags which are not eco-friendly and hard to dispose off; are cause of garbage pollution. These bags neither can be recycled nor can be disposed off, and consequently at times end up in sea water hence causing danger to marine life. Resent news has shown a whale, which was in pain and on verge of death. When she was operated thousands of plastic bags were found in her stomach. Is not this monstrosity?
Indeed there are certain procedures which can be done to handle above mentioned problems. If Government starts fining people who are seen throwing garbage purposefully can decrease the unwanted waste level drastically. Such people must be involved in community work to clean up the environment, enforced by law. Also, plastic bags must be replaced with bio degradable ones, which are recyclable and reusable and do not cause any harm to the environment. Furthermore, bins must be installed after every few intervals in order to inculcate the sense of responsibility among people to throw rubbish in respective bins. A case in point, different areas have setup certain certified cleanliness community for themselves in order to keep a proper check and balance.
To conclude, people must be made aware of not throwing rubbish randomly and also must be encouraged to use eco friendly materials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As they say cleanliness is half faith. But...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...llution today is a worldwide conundrum. According to me the main causes are over population and...
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Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...nd how to take some measures to resolve these problem. First cause of excessive waste is o...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hich was in pain and on verge of death. When she was operated thousands of plastic b...
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Suggestion: Indeed,
...r stomach. Is not this monstrosity? Indeed there are certain procedures which can ...
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...one to handle above mentioned problems. If Government starts fining people who are...
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Message: Did you mean 'have set up'?
Suggestion: have set up
... bins. A case in point, different areas have setup certain certified cleanliness community...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...couraged to use eco friendly materials.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99747474747 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65453291473 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5306596912 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4583333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203778796979 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536420329325 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508891776014 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140300141215 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080854105622 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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