Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them. discuss advantages and disadvantages
People hold different views as to whether using computers at very young age would be beneficial or might have a detrimental effect on children. Using computers at an early age would certainly have some negative impacts on children whereas it is likely to have a few positive effects as well.
Considering the positive aspects of using artificial intelligence at a young age. The primary benefit is that at this age child tends to learn fast due to curiosity. Moreover, there are many studies in this regard that proves children's brain cells releases a higher amount of chemicals required for fast learning. Secondly, knowledge about computers would be a necessity for next-generation: thereby early start may possibly improve their understanding about the subject and might also help them remain ahead of their peers.
However, over usage of electronic gadgets such as computers are known to have a detrimental impact on a child's physical and mental well-being. Owing to the addictive nature of these gadgets and also because of online games and social media applications available on devices children spend hours in front of these equipment. This possibly will lead to sedentary lifestyle and may cause obesity or problems of the eyes. According to facts and figures reported in a news magazine, around 2% of the young population who are suffering from depression are victims of the disease due to isolation resulting because of over usage of such machines.
To conclude, although computers are the basic requirement for upcoming generations, over usage of such devices has negatively affected children mental and physical health
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
People hold different views as to whether using computers at very young age would...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...s that at this age child tends to learn fast due to curiosity. Moreover, there are m...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'may', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: may; possibly
...or next-generation: thereby early start may possibly improve their understanding about the s...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'may'.
Suggestion: may
...or next-generation: thereby early start may possibly improve their understanding about the s...
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Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this equipment' or 'these equipments'?
Suggestion: this equipment; these equipments
...evices children spend hours in front of these equipment. This possibly will lead to sedentary l...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed children mental and physical health .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28735632184 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83055864347 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3977827398 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.454545455 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239010033756 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785039639762 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514269393923 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131309980367 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480816807355 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.