With better technology and improvements, going abroad has become convenient and straightforward. This essay explores the positive sides of traveling across the world, including benefits such as education, business and tourism.
To begin, education field has seen the most positive impacts. Such as most of the students from developing countries prefer to go abroad for higher studies. This is so because of the simple process that is requires only a passport and a student visa. My friend who recently got enrolled in an Australian university explained how easily he got the student visa based on study criteria. As a result Besides education, people can travel to different countries for the purpose of business merely with their passport and no other complex formalities. For example, one of the relatives went to Australia for business meeting by simply booking online ticket for flight and no extra legal permissions required. Not only this, flights' fare are even feasible to bear for a common man as well.
Apart from business and education, tourism comes as a second big advantage. On one side, whereas people can complete their dream of visiting any country, on the other side, tourism gives a boost to the economy of the nation. In addition to this, trips gives experience and knowledge of local customs, traditions, and latest technologies in use. For instance, my cousin visits a new country every year, as a result to his trips and interest, he now knows the basics of four foreign languages.
As discussed above, with travelling across globe having become feasible and uncomplicated, not only nations but also the people have got benefited. Overall, straightforward steps and no complicated formalities have proved foreign trips beneficial for mankind.
- The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree 61
- Scientists believe that computer artificial intelligence not humans will control cars in the near future What are the reasons for that Would this be a positive or negative development 56
- It has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other countries Do you think it is a positive or a negative development Give your opinion and relevant examples from your experience 85
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26855123675 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84681118596 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621908127208 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9814281286 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17438113229 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543815899243 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375650982384 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959227990997 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276018583999 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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