For the last decade travelling abroad has become more feasible due significant changes in the migration systems of many countries. People have much more possibilities to go to other countries for studying, working or just travelling. I think that these opportunities have more advantages than disadvantages and governments of different countries should encourage voyagers to visit their country.
To begin with, travelling abroad is essential part of our life. It allows learning new languages, traditions and customs of a variety of nations. People who spend much time in travels are less likely to fall into depression, more benevolent and outgoing. As a result, they are usually successful in career, family lives and many other aspects. To give a clear example, the famous rock-singer Ozzy Osbourne has spent a biggest part of his life touring with his own band. However, his way of life is obviously not the best. Previously, he has been struggling with alcoholic addiction for many times, but in spite of this, he feels himself excellent. The reason for that is indisputably long time travelling, which he is going through every year.
The second benefit of travel to other countries is a possibility to get a work experience with international companies. When it goes about people who live in the Third World countries, it is their chance to immigrate to a high-developed country and be the part of its development. Thus, Indian international company “Arsellor Mital” invited roughly 1000 employees to its filial in Germany in the fall of 2014. The prospective youth obtained an excellent opportunity to work in one of the high-developed European countries.
On the other hand, there is one disadvantages of this tendency. It is an extremely high possibility for terrorists to enter to another country under cover of tourist or worker. But, in my opinion, this obstacle could be resolved by improving surveillance in airports and military system in general.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that travelling to other countries mostly benefits our society and creates more opportunities for the working class and students.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: max1991
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 416, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, third, thus, i think, in conclusion, in general, as a result, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26979472141 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07640148445 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609970674487 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5792982437 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5789473684 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210899957956 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582454074462 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486528298453 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118624496824 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448668874521 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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