It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It has been argued for quite a long time that famous people had to compromise many things related to day to day lives to influence others and successfully achieved big executive positions. However, they did not bother about their personal lives and families to achieve this level. Other people should try to copy their ideas and thoughts to attain a level of achievements, but they should keep in mind that personal life is equally important with work-life. In this essay, I will provide further reasons with appropriate examples to explain this phenomenon, which helps many of us to achieve career goals.
It should be a priority for every working individual that they follow a proper schedule on how to tackle and balance personal and professional lives. Furthermore, they should focus on planned working hours and make certain that it will not exceed, so that they could able to manage their personal lives and families. Many executives, for instance, who are responsible for lots of decisions at their work, have to work for long hours in office and stay away from their families. They should restrict working time and spend as much as time with their children and other family members.
Nowadays, there is a popular option available in offices, called work from home, people can avail it whenever required, especially women. It gives flexibility to employees to work on their assignments from their respective homes. As a consequence, many things have improved in their personal lives and helped many people to achieve targets. Working mothers, for example, who have to face lots of problems while going office and taking care of their infants. The work from home facility, for example, resolved these problems across the world.
To sum up, I would say that following a proper working schedule which restrict their time for every task, and work from home facility helped many people to achieve their goals and to attain a good level further in their professional lives.
- Some poeple work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
- News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures.Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words.What is your opinion about this? 73
- Creative artists should always have the freedom to express their ideas (in paintings, books, films and songs) in anyway they wish. The government should not restrict what they doTo what extent do you agree with this opinion? 73
- Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child’s education.Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to day'.
Suggestion: to day
...e had to compromise many things related to day to day lives to influence others and successfu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0487804878 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51940712363 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5673535921 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378098942125 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136882004395 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595360325833 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233524703827 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220398408409 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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