It has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. Do the benefits of globalisation outweigh the drawbacks?

After 2nd world war,when imperial countries were breaking down & new countries were raised their head in this world, then the world leaders thought a new world order that can be helpful for future regnal is 'Globalization'.The word Globalization is not limited into certain meaning,but it has polygraphic significance.I think in modern economic system,Globalisation plays pivotal role.
In 1917,when socialism throved in Russia,then capitalist's countries became frightened for their forthcoming misfortune.Then after 2nd world war,world leaders established UN,WB,IMF. These institutions are encouraged the new terms Globalisation. It has some positive/useful sites also. Firstly, capital expansion through poor country, that occurs infrastructure development,communication facilities, education,health social awarness etc.are being developed;companies like Unilever conducted business and made many job for native peoples, people can use quality products easily. Secondly, Bangladesh is now world 4th garments exporting country. Many foreign buyers come to this country for cheap rate,quality and many also. Millions of people get job into Garment industries, as a result economy of Bangldesh has been stronger. Finally,Globalization opens a new door into the developing countries.
On the contrary, many argued that, Globalisation is the key factor of Capitalism. Distance between rich and poor becoming high. such an example, only 43 people hold more than 314 crore people's wealth. Multinational capital can't grow the local investor,consequently they loose the market. uncontrolled consumption of coal,gaz,oil in industry, environment become threatened.

In these circumstances stated that, the benefits of Globalisation outwigh the drawbacks.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, i think, as a result, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.34453781513 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.9445172582 2.80592935109 141% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.747899159664 0.561755894193 133% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 93.870454469 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113077345734 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321624957948 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348353383213 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755784322964 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261208062814 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.2 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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