It has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which
there are no boundaries to trade and communication.
Do the benefits of globalisation outweigh the drawbacks?
Some experts assert that the people, these days, can trade and communicate throughout the world as it has been coming up as a global family for the last few years. From my perspective, I opine that we, the people from the whole world when makes endeavor together brings more benefit as compared to any drawback it might bring.
To begin with, the foremost advantage of this is a rise in the economy of any country. Since air transportation will fosters businessman to commute easily in various countries, the chances of meeting a large number of customer have been possible. This has encouraged business. For example, the Malaysian government earmarks 4% rise in the export of palm oil because their traders are now selling at almost every part of the world.
In addition to the above, it has enabled travelers to enjoy vivid cultures globally. This is due to the flexibility of the present scenario enabling citizens to travel every country and enjoy their taste by staying over there, either for business or enjoying a holiday. To exemplify, being on a trip to a foreign country, tourist can eat their food and assimilate the lifestyle of an alien country.
However, globalization has a risk of safety, too. When people travel abroad, they are unaware of the dangers of visiting area. They sometimes are succumbed to the offenders in that region and ultimately face safety issue. For instance, as per UN guidelines, almost 20% of foreign travelers in eastern countries are harassed by locals. The concerned government is nowadays trying to frame harsh rule to mitigate such incidents.
To conclude, I firmly advocate that merits, such as economic growth and enjoyment of various culture arising from globalization outweigh the manageable issues related to safety in the host country.
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| 2019-11-24 | chetan Patthar | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24825174825 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73411370815 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646853146853 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9819410473 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931921513072 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256490502662 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365590369219 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519534841201 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509618403777 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.