Nowadays, some people believe that there is a big difference among right and right. As every kid needs to know them exactly, perhaps to be out of mistakes during his lifetime. Moreover, some suggest that punishment in early ages of life would help humankind due to treat well in the future. Personally, I disagree with this notion, strongly, because of human rights and the results fo punishment that I've seen during my life.
In one hand, most of the modern societies confessed about the same rights for each individual and this rights titled to human rights which implies to different aspects of life. For instance, every person is free to make a decision about his beliefs which means, that person is able to recognize what is suitable (right) or unappropriate (wrong). Thus, it seems to be absurd if we ask from an individual to believe in what we persume as the right or wrong side of each event.
On the other side, most of the experts, who work with children, pointed out to the dark side of punishment to young people. Furthermore, I want to illustrate some bad aspects of punishment on myself and the others. When I was a little kid, I used to hunt some little birds in the yard of the place that we were living. I know that my act was not suitable but a neighbor, who was angry with my business, started to use violence against me as a punishment. Hence, after many years, I feel fear when I touch a bird or any other animal species because it reminds me that punishment.
Finally, in my opinion, punishment can not solve any issue, however it may results to new crisis for a person. Learning by punishment is an old method which doesn't mean to be the best approach toward learning. These days most of the people are aware of human rights and the unconvinience results of punishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57453416149 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5303775336 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562111801242 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7445571378 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.2 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244554591449 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724619167003 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478311603243 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137327373281 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491819537392 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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