It is important to construct common areas such as parks, playgrounds and squares in all towns and cities. Do you agree or disagree?
While cities are getting highly populated and congested, the well-structured town planning is the demand of time. Parks and playgrounds are carrying not only aesthetic and social value but also carrying health benefits for the society. Hence, I strongly in favor of incorporating the squares and the gardens as a part of city development and in the benefit of citizens.
Firstly, since the last two decades, the cities have become a concrete jungle where you can hardly find any trees and greeneries around you. Constructing gardens and parks only can commensurate the need of green belt of that area. Apart from it, gardens are the lungs of the city which can not only absorb carbon emission from the environment but also supplies the life sustenance oxygen to the dwellers. More to it, having such place themselves, people will cultivate a habit of exercising and playing in their routine, which can result in the healthy society. For instance, Ahmedabad municipal corporation has developed many gardens and community centers in the various locality of Ahmedabad. It has improved the lifestyle of the citizen which is reflecting in the rate of obesity declined in the city.
Furthermore, Everyone is looking forward a place where they can spend their leisure time with their kith and kin and get rid off from the routine wear and tear. Thus, parks and community centers increase the sense of socialism by providing a mean of meeting place. For instance, youngsters can visit community center to explore their hobbies like skating, playing etc which can relax them from the stress of the studies or work. Elders can spend their sedentary life by visiting parks and enjoying the company of new and old friends. What is more, children would be inspired more by the outdoor sports which can give birth to many future athletes from the country.
To sum up, Developing cities by considering the importance of parks and playgrounds can motivate citizen to develop happy and healthy lifestyle not only for personal benefits but also in benefit of community and country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06140350877 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6306577335 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6696597268 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0644656784254 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232348190638 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279888164056 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0451297825961 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264325281934 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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