It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Now a days, the development of technology not only affects our life style but also has made us that can not live without it. Therefore , some people say that because of growing of technology, traditional culture will be lose ,and others seem to be unaffected by technology and modern world.
The technology develops has brought a convinced society and people apply it in our life. Through some examples,we can see that traditional cultures have lost.first of all, people currently prefer to read E book rather than paper book . Because of it , people ,enjoy reading paper books, have been gone down in society and worry about losing the culture of reading paper books.
Secondly,instead of hand writing letter, people are using email .it is surely convenient and fast to deliver, beside, we can not feel the special emotions anymore by using email.last but not least, the way of communication has being changed from face to face to social network services.people nowadays, are asking after how they are going by showing photos and short message in SNS.
In my view,besides I mentioned above all, many cultures will be change in the future.
In spite of above those, others support the idea that traditional cultures are not lose and prevented by some groups and communities.
People who love traditional way of things they like keep going to communicate
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- It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? 73
- It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, first of all, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06222222222 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77316136866 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4274302239 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.555555556 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216385183069 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979793548289 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666106662571 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115399710945 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644054496316 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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