It is often argued that children must be protected from unsuitable material on tv and internet by government censorship .Others say that it is the parents responsibility to control what their children do and watch .To what extent do you think that this is true?
From past 10 years ,a significant number of explicit programs have been aired on tv/internet. Some people say that it is government’s duty to censor these programs ,while others argue that it is parents responsibility to look after their children .this essay will discuss both the views and give my opinion.
To begin, some of the programs contain sexual and violent themes ,which may not be appropriate for children .Some nations appoint special team designated to watch these unsuitable content before they release on tv /internet .if this team comes across any explicit material ,then they censor those part of the program and release suitable content .I feel that every nation must follow this approach ,because it is easy for governments to ban those programs .in addition to it ,parents may not find time to look after their children every time .so if the government cut these programs ,it would be easy to control the kids as a whole.
However , banning can not stop children from viewing the programs. Children have the freedom to watch programs on tv /internet and the governments can not take whole responsibility to ban the programs ,Because ,they might face legal issues .Parents ,on the other hand ,play a pivotal role too. They must offer other alternative activities such as playing games, Gardening . and also it is parent’s responsibility to look after their children and explain the consequences in a clear and understandable way .so that children would be convinced and avoid watching such programs.
In conclusion, parents and government have equal amount of responsibility to avoid children from watching inappropriate content on tv .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22304832714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89107838607 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.799119614 49.4020404114 348% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.625 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.625 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308161134339 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145403085757 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564726048582 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209019141397 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266426330824 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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