it is often said that government spends too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important.
Do you agree or disagree?
there is no doubt that wildlife is a necessary part of human life on which we all are dependent. While some people believe that wildlife protection needs good funding and prior attention from government, but I completely agree that there are other essential issues exist, having precedence, and they require more money than wildlife projects.
Firstly, global warming is one of the most crucial, dangerous issues all over the world that requires more funding and attention from the national governments. Climate change has been occurring that is affecting human and animal life throughout the earth. For instance, glaciers in Antarctica have been started melting and scientists are wary that it will increase water level in coming years and, will possess a great threat to regions near to oceans. if activities causing global warming not stop, environment conditions will jeopardize and earth will become a heat chamber, therefore, human life will be under a severe danger.
Another global issue to be consider on priority is water pollution caused due to plastic and waste disposal into the sea. many industries and medical institutions are disposing their waste into rivers and sea, which is causing huge danger to sea life. To illustrate this, many endangered sea species such as dolphins, whales are dying nowadays, due to the contamination of water in the ocean. if sea life is not protected, we will have more extinct and endangered water species. As a result, government will have to provide huge funding for protection of such animals in the future.
In my opinion, although, wildlife projects are very important in order to save the endangered plants and animals but, global warming and water pollution are the main problems that are impacting earth tremendously, and they require more priority and money from the governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23310810811 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65723365644 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8035217199 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123952175403 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438717657604 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643538505551 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954862912786 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748305405976 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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