In this contemporary era, the rate of teenage crime is inclining with a great pace. Some people held the violent and negative content telecasted by media to be responsible in juvenile crime growth. This essay will discuss the reason why media plays a crucial role in enhancing the offence rate and put forward a solution for this issue.
The major reason behind the growth in rate of crime committed by adolescents is the scenes shown in television programs, news, et cetera. Certain programs are broadcasted on TV which include dangerous activities like murder, theft, accidents, et cetera, influences the mind of youngsters to a greater extent. Moreover, teenagers generally mark a superstar as their role model and repeat the actions performed by them on the screen; without knowing the fact that stars perform the stunts under supervision of experts. For instance, if a star would commit a murder, his or her follower will tend to do the same in order to follow their role models. Thus, median negatively influence the mind of young-lings.
However, in order to overcome this issue, certain steps are required to be carried out. Firstly, sensor board should have a tight check on the content of a particular channel and cut the scenes that are not in favor of public betterment. In addition, parents should have a regular check on their wards' activities and pay attention to their media-usage time. Also, children should be asked to use media only under their parents' supervision. Thus, in order to decline the juvenile adequacies, aforementioned or other steps should be taken.
In conclusion, this essay discussed how media is responsible for increasing the juvenile crime and provided solutions for the same. However, in my opinion, until efforts are made, this problem will only escalate. So, it is a duty of both government and parents to solve this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04854368932 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71799580173 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8087759888 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221119947924 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718696891622 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750951237902 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147531201413 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880412688258 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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