Art is considered to be very essential source of knowledge about a particular region and its culture. However, in this contemporary world of competition, more and more people give more importance to science, technology and business instead of arts. This essay will discuss the reason behind declination in people's interest in art and suggest several steps that can be proven to be help in encouraging the society to take part in it.
The major reason behind this reduction is the shifting of mindset of current generation from artwork to commercialization. Nowadays, they now focus on reaching the goal they have set for themselves in the field of their education and profession. In addition, individuals consider art unproductive and merely wastage of time because art, unlike industry, cannot help the people to make their both ends meet. Take artists as an example; their living style is often seem to be miserable and of low standard as compared to those of employed in any type of technical work. Thus, the people have turned their centre of attention to earn more and more.
However, tackling this issue involves altering the public's mindset that needs to happen with the help of government. The government authorities should take different steps in order to maintain the attentiveness of society towards art-work. For example, it should organize prize-giving contests for artists and local people as it will help them to enhance and encourage their drawing and representing skills among people. Moreover, proper employment facilities should be provided to help them earn their necessities. That is why; there is always a need of help from government.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the factor contributing the drop in people's interest towards art and suggested some solutions that can cope up with this issue. However, in my opinion, unless efforts are made it is impossible to change the thoughts of society regarding art and craft.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85453849557 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574603174603 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3153413311 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235994128004 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754732432639 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540388978728 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144385169578 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698833330271 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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