It is said that the amount of violence on the TV programmes has negative effect on our social development and therefore should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Television is one of the major source of entertainment. People of different age groups prefer to watch TV in their leisure time. But, It has been considered that the violence shown in programs broadcast on TV have ill-effects on the advancement of society. In my opinion, although there are benefits of watching TV, still I agree with the former statement.
The predominant cause is that the teenagers get easily effected by the things shown on television. They find it cool, when their favourite heroes smoke or drink on screen. Youngsters try to follow them in their real life and it becomes their habit of drinking and smoking. While they are not in their senses, they indulge into anti-social activities, for example without any reason they start fighting with anyone, met with an accident when they drink and drive causing harm to themselves as well as to others, when they do not have enough money to buy drugs then they start doing robbery, rape cases and the list goes on.
Moreover, nowadays most of the shows aired on TV are criminal shows. By watching such shows, mind of the community get distracted and individuals do not trust even on their relatives or neighbours. People are becoming self-centered and as a result bond among the residents of society becomes weak. Beside that, they do not help any needy person who is suffering miserably.
In conclusion, I would like to say that it should be the responsibility of the government to impose restrictions on the shows which involve violence to great extent. Other than that, movie makers must aware the viewers at the starting of movie that drinking and smoking is injurious to health and the stunts are performed under expert supervision. Also, parents should make their children understand that the programs shown on television are not related to real life otherwise they have to suffer from great loss.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94620253165 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66026707496 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9759270614 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130955606189 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393645580113 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398025945815 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768835185542 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260352536171 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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