It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.
In the past, people used to get married after turning 20. Family was a main purpose of youth. Today it’s opposite. A good career is a passion number one for contemporary young people. It is thought by them, that, they will able to create a family and raise children in their thirties or forties. I totally disagree with that meaning.
The matter is that, that early marriage has its own advantages. Firstly, you will be given a birth to your child while you still young. Therefore, there is more possibility to see your grandchildren and help your own kids to raise them. Secondly, it is a well-known meaning that as younger parents, as healthier their children. A young couple has more chances to born strong and healthy children and spare their money for medication.
From my own practice, I know a few couples that gave a birth to their kids in their mid-forties. As a result, children were born with some disabilities. These families were obliged to ask governments for help and lend a lot of money from their friends for surgeries. Fortunately, those children are healthful and strong now, but it could be worse.
In conclusion I’d like to say that people shouldn’t be selfish and think about their future, about forthcoming children. So getting married until thirty is a best choice. However, it has its own drawbacks. For, example sometimes young people in love are blind each other bad sides and consequently they will be divorced. But in any case, I think that advantages of early marriage are overweighting it’s disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ren. So getting married until thirty is a best choice. However, it has its own dr...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'example'.
Suggestion: sometimes example
...However, it has its own drawbacks. For, example sometimes young people in love are blind each oth...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in any case']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2 0.247107183377 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.165079365079 0.155533422707 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101587301587 0.0946595960268 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0349206349206 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0920634920635 0.0437548338989 210% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107936507937 0.122226691241 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0349206349206 0.0403226058552 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81617401241 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285714285714 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0666666666667 0.0861772015684 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0126984126984 0.021408717616 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0031746031746 0.011925033212 27% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1564.0 1933.35771543 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 316.048096192 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.94676806084 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315589353612 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254752851711 0.28420135186 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174904942966 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117870722433 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81617401241 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.037074148 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 63.6783360257 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.15 20.7743622355 63% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8668106548 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2 127.492653851 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.15 20.7743622355 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.814263465372 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 38.6252851711 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.17391304348 1.69124875643 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354841104256 0.332605444948 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0437706138549 0.102741220458 43% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0477349224537 0.0668466124924 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.390440729657 0.534860350844 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122216397171 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103916991863 0.134430193775 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566760932266 0.0742795772207 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.246590692803 0.324371583561 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0333838113911 0.0638462369009 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230681091184 0.228012699653 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421599766044 0.058150111329 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.