In this modern era, up-to-date young generation are fascinated for getting married after building career. As a repercussions number of late marriage increasing tremendously. In that case, several people asserted that, modern people should be enforce to get marriage before 30. Mainly I agree with the idea because, it is sign of developed society. But I also believe that, I should be depend on situation. So, this essay will explain the issue on the base of it.
To begin with, there are numerous reason why people should marry before 30. First of all, for women late marriage can be risk able for getting pregnant. As human hormones are changing after 30 and 24-29 is the best suitable fit period for being pregnant. For example, according to the report of Dhaka medical college (DMC), 21-23 age is the best age for getting marriage and 24-28 age is suitable for being pregnant. Therefore, married in 30 appropriate for health. Moreover, marriage in in perfect age help to reduce social evil like, rape. Some religion principal also support to marriage early to develop society. Such as, Muslim religion in support of marriage before 30. For instance, international newspaper " Daily Star" published in 2017 that, from lost decade count of rape increase 20% and most of the rapist are young unmarried even under 30. Thus, marriage before 30 is essential for society.
On the flip side, looking forwards to economic condition is really necessary for getting marriage. Person should be able to take the responsibility of family before marry. In that case, young starts should marry after finishing study and start career well. As a result according to situation it may take time.
In conclusion, though early marriage normally more beneficial but depending on other thinks like education, career, this decision should be choice left to a person not to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... getting married after building career. As a repercussions number of late marriage...
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Message: Did you mean 'enforced'?
Suggestion: enforced
... asserted that, modern people should be enforce to get marriage before 30. Mainly I agr...
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Message: Did you mean 'depended'?
Suggestion: depended
...y. But I also believe that, I should be depend on situation. So, this essay will expla...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...ropriate for health. Moreover, marriage in in perfect age help to reduce social evil ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... finishing study and start career well. As a result according to situation it may ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0974025974 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57797114677 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5309230546 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7619047619 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37595228427 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111704830745 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762733597403 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208067341118 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882984761636 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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