It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this best both for the individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree?
It says that people are encouraged to get married before they are 30, How will be affect to the people and in our society.
I agree because getting married before the age of 30 is the best to those people know what life is all about. They enter the second part of there lives knowing that they can provide what they need, buisness or having a firm of funds as well. What I'm trying to say is that if they can build their own family then why not if they can handle it.
What I mean is like for example if they finished study, having a stable work thats the time getting married and to have a wonderful family.
In line of our society yes, this is the best way of having a family, we controled our population that increasing up to this days. And for Individuals yes its important to know that having a family is not easy, you must think first otherwise you cant achived your goal or dream for your family.
In summary getting married is not easy, you must think first.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, well, for example, i mean, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28648648649 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05544760694 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.384769539078 780% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3140866001 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342499785349 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147794903891 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914989516998 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185799026822 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807251839182 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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