Marriage is a unique blessing and precious way to celebrate love between two people. And to be able to get married you have to feel it from your heart. I believe that, marriage should never be encouraged or forced before a certain age. This due to the fact that love come naturally without us thinking about it or realizing that we are in love.
People get married because they found something special in the other partner. This could be that they understand them without talking, or even they make them feel safe, loved and happy. Unfortunately, this kind of feeling can not be controlled or forced by us or others. It`s hard to think about marriage this way. Firstly, what if they did not meet the right person for them before they are in their 30th. Otherwise they have to get married and being unhappy for only the sake of some old myths that doesn`t excite. Thinking about it deeply and realistically, this will increase the divorce rate in all over the world. Furthermore, it might affect the kids when they see that their parents not happy and will change their idea about marriage when they grow up in unhealthy environment.
Some people especially women agree to get married before their 30th only because they wanted to have kids while they are still young. However, we live in the era of the advanced technologies in fertilization that made it easier for us and gave us more opportunities and solutions to have.
In the finale analysis, I believe that regardless of our age we all should be happy with our life`s decisions. And never let others contributing and ruined the one life we have just to fit in and please the society. This includes the decision of when we should get married or who.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...or them before they are in their 30th. Otherwise they have to get married and being unha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71947194719 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52729870096 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551155115512 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1779038761 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1176470588 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203637101858 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709922852268 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509499712835 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122819950907 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00998792351254 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.