It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It has been observed over the period of time that there are lots of opportunities to enhance our mental thoughts and general knowledge whenever we travel to any place. However, I personally believe that travel helps us in many ways to expand our mindset and patience level. In this essay, I will discuss about how travel helps us to improve our brain functioning by knowing different people from different backgrounds and exploring new places.
To begin with, travel gives us opportunity to meet new people from various countries and different cultures. We learn lots of things about their daily routine and cultures which helps us to expand our mindset in many ways. Nevertheless, our mind starts working widely while spending time with open minded people from other countries. Last summers, for instance, when I went to Kasol on my holidays, I met with a group of people from Russia, who helped me to learn new ways to enjoy life.
Exploring new places while travelling to new places, helps us to enhance our mindset and thought process. Whenever we go on outstation trips, we feel fresh and peaceful which widely helps us in increasing our memory and other brain functioning. Furthermore, It deepan our general knowledge about new cultures and expand our memory. Many people, for example, travel to hill stations to spend some quality time with their family to refresh their mind and to relax.
To sum up, travel is great way to learn about different people and about their culture. Moreover, it helps us to feel refreshed and widen our brain functioning by exploring new places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
It has been observed over the period of time that there are lots of opportunities to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96254681648 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53084882055 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2921949525 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956474039113 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432531073138 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351788311937 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662930485456 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331225408751 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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