It is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been a matter of intense debate for quite some time now as to what should be done with the old building. It is asserted by some people that maintenance of ancient and historical buildings requires a huge amount of money hence, instead of wasting that money on outdated building new should be constructed. In my opinion, the old buildings should be preserved and maintained.
There are a lot of benefits to preserving old historical art and ancient history. To begin with, first and foremost it, they signify the magnificent history and culture of ancient society. For instance, the Ajanta and Ellora cave of India is the biggest example of the preservation of historical culture. These ancient monuments also help in boosting tourism in the region hence, it is required to maintain them in a proper manner so they might not lose their busy. Secondly, they create lots of employment opportunities for local and other which means that they help in the eradication of the most prevailing problem that is unemployment. Therefore, if there would be better employment opportunities then people can easily participate in the economic growth of the country.
The other advantages of saving these old buildings are they can be used for other purposes if cannot be utilized as a tourist place. For instance, the king palace of Faridkot has been converted into a big hospital, the Umedh Bhawan in Rajasthan has been transformed as the hotel which helps in generating revenue for the state government. Hence, they generate double revenue that their maintenance cost.
To conclude, preservation of the historical building not only enhance the tourism of the country but also help in generating employment and also accelerate economic growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... hence, it is required to maintain them in a proper manner so they might not lose their busy. Seco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15087719298 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.837804847 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2452880936 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17994079348 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710134298072 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950599403078 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125460069577 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119927130667 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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