Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include:
• Why you bought it
• What you liked and disliked about it
• Suggestions for improvement
Dear Editor,
I am a regular reader of your monthly magazine “Current Affairs”. I am writing this to provide you honest feedback.
I am a UPSC aspirant and I use to read your magazine every month. I was not earlier aware of this magazine but I joined an institute they gave me a list of books that could help me in my studies. There were lots of magazines name which confused me hence, I took the guidance of my tutor and she suggested to me your magazine.
The way of providing adequate information is appreciable. It provides relevant material as per the government exams are concerned. Overall, I like your magazine and suggest to everyone who is preparing for the exams.
The only drawback is its printing quality. The quality of the print is quite low which makes it difficult to read the text. So, please make sure that the quality of printing should be good enough to ready.
Thank you for bringing out such a magazine. I appreciate your this act.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-09-08 | sahilshell | 89 | view |
| 2020-04-01 | kjot_59 | 75 | view |
| 2020-03-26 | sohailahmad | 89 | view |
- While it is sometimes thought that prison is the best place for criminals others believe that there are better ways to deal with them What is your opinion 59
- The rise of the convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle So the advantage outweighs the disadvantages 73
- You are going to visit the UK for an English and Homestay program Write a letter to the host family introduce yourself ask the family some question to get essential information about the UK tell the family scheduled date of arrival and time 73
- Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc to serve society Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel Task Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving what type of rooms you would like and ask them how much the weekend will co 73
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...this to provide you honest feedback. I am a UPSC aspirant and I use to read yo...
^
Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...feedback. I am a UPSC aspirant and I use to read your magazine every month. I wa...
^^^
Line 6, column 67, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... use to read your magazine every month. I was not earlier aware of this magazine ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74857142857 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66266093698 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5368265457 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.3571428571 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187265358996 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619458524211 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635338910479 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100636813137 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609058668865 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...this to provide you honest feedback. I am a UPSC aspirant and I use to read yo...
^
Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...feedback. I am a UPSC aspirant and I use to read your magazine every month. I wa...
^^^
Line 6, column 67, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... use to read your magazine every month. I was not earlier aware of this magazine ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74857142857 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66266093698 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5368265457 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.3571428571 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187265358996 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619458524211 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635338910479 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100636813137 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609058668865 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.