Marriage and commitments are very mature decision. I strongly beleive that, it does not required boundries and age limition but nowadays, we live in a supremacy society. It has some norms and value regarding education, standard of living, basic needs etc. So, we should try to accept this reality with positive manners. Some how I partially agree with this statement.
At begin with, if we talk about past year experience the living of standard was not too much high. Even most of the people had less expected as well as less demanded. So, at that time earlier marriage decision was quite easy just because of camaraderie behaviour.of people.They were understandable. For example, according to UK research in early 1990s divorce ratio was only 20 percent because people did not compete to each other.
Furthermore, Now the situation is totally different everyone wants to live luxury life. Eventually they do not want to compromise any single thing. They have required branded stuffs, own houses, cars etc. Inspite of, this things people need time because they all stuff are expensive and without good job and lack of establishment it could not be possible. Moreover, I want to say that at this situation, early marriage is totally juvenile decision.
Most of the young generation do early marriage just because of over excitement. But after that, they realize it was too hurry decision. Overall, this situation is increasing the ratio of divorce because people are over demanded the it is unkind decision for them.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that government should try to play active role and provide some awareness programs especially for young generation who wants to do early marriage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...commitments are very mature decision. I strongly beleive that, it does not required boundries an...
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...n. I strongly beleive that, it does not required boundries and age limition but nowadays...
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Suggestion: Somehow
...ept this reality with positive manners. Some how I partially agree with this statement. ...
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Suggestion: They
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Message: "required branded" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'branding' or 'to be branded'.
Suggestion: branding; to be branded
...se any single thing. They have required branded stuffs, own houses, cars etc. Inspite o...
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...r, I want to say that at this situation, early marriage is totally juvenile decis...
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Suggestion: to hurry
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Suggestion: hurried
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08510638298 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69078612366 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620567375887 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3481855286 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.043384290613 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0134794023902 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243044578009 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0241505608798 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192581751856 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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