I strongly believe that one should complete their academics have a decent job with a stable career before choosing to get married. In this essay I will highlight the main advantages in favour of my opinion and the disadvantages of getting married prior to completion of one's education and securing a job.
Being educated or finishing your studies often compliments in clearing and development of an individual's career interest. Firstly, it helps the student recognise his/her potential in pursuing a field of their interest. Secondly, it supplements in securing a job enough to kick start and learn to build a career in a specific domain.
Lastly, the person gets paid wages or salary based on the work on a weekly or monthly basis. Therefore contributing to a steady flow on income.
To run a family it is vital to have a steady flow of income. Once he/she realises this fact it is quite comfortable to take a decision to get married and settle down. Furthermore, this induces a sense of security to manage expenses in the family and also contributes to happiness and long lasting relationships.
The most interesting question to ask is perhaps would it be a rational choice of getting married before you establish yourself? Based on our discussion earlier, it is a foolish decision.
Awareness should be spread among youngsters of the implications to their lives for making an in-sensible and a sensible decision. This will not only help them understand the gravity of the situation, but will also help them work harder and focus on their financial well being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... getting married prior to completion of ones education and securing a job. Being ...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...pliments in clearing and development of an individuals career interest. Firstly, it helps the ...
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Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... the work on a weekly or monthly basis. Therefore contributing to a steady flow on income...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89386336917 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596958174905 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7941468219 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223310838731 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649194291342 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739978608694 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106398326571 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872137269599 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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