In the last 20 years, improvement in Information Technology have been changing the way of living and communicating. Face-to-face connections are replaced by emails, the easiest way up to now. However, in my opinion, these changes can also have negative effects, but the pros outweigh the cons.
Nowadays, IT is playing a crucial role in terms of communications, especially in telecontinental relations. People or workers do their everyday tasks or their jobs with the help of Information Technology. There are some ways of connections which have provided easier ways of communications. Some huge organizations or companies have been using this technology to perform their operations such as NASA, Microsoft and etc. Every day, people use email to send word, communicate, or send information to others which had to be done in face-to-face connection or through writing a letter in the past.
On the other hand, there are some websites or some communication ways providing illegal and unethical information or relations. Using the Internet freely by children is a serious parents concern. Even it can be said that, not only children, but also adults can be harmed by using unethical websites. There is no way to control or prohibit the access of these websites. Every day, some software is produced to control the usage of websites, but those people who want to surf these websites finally find a way to bypass prohibition methods. It is really not easy to deal with. Emails have made people lazy and uninterested to have a physical relation in society.
In conclusion, it must be said that the effects of advanced IT devices have been providing new ways of communication and in recent years, websites and email are a part of daily routine events. However, with improving the moral values at schools or in public, these improvements are essential and admirable.
- As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. 91
- In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, future development in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. 73
- Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- 'studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language'. 67
- Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...heir operations such as NASA, Microsoft and etc. Every day, people use email to send wor...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'really', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263157894737 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0877192982456 0.0946595960268 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0380116959064 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0204678362573 0.0437548338989 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0994152046784 0.122226691241 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0555555555556 0.0403226058552 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.03456040302 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321637426901 0.0326793684256 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0964912280702 0.0861772015684 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0116959064327 0.021408717616 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00877192982456 0.011925033212 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1861.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 6.10163934426 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350819672131 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.288524590164 0.28420135186 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219672131148 0.203846283523 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140983606557 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03456040302 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554098360656 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.2354986261 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9411764706 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7609639729 49.517814964 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.470588235 127.492653851 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.814263465372 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 46.793635487 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.85714285714 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45788308796 0.332605444948 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0941846357482 0.102741220458 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0787527870289 0.0668466124924 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473667414599 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144077813287 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167090901179 0.134430193775 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107375406196 0.0742795772207 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299209638844 0.324371583561 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.039624402762 0.0638462369009 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341831647357 0.228012699653 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922200623623 0.058150111329 159% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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