Leaders of all kind are younger than in the past. What are the reasons for this? Is this positive or negative development.
New generations are appointed in the top level position which is being practised in many countries around the world than before. Recently, young people are playing a significant role as a leader and they have major challenges which might create a benefits or drawbacks for the company prosperity.
Thinking about the past there were few leaders who were young but, in today’s situation, the world is different companies prefer to hire young people who can take more responsibility. Young staffs are more into achieving their goals within a given time frame which require a better understanding and hard work. For example, Coles is one of the reputed supermarkets in Australia where the managers are given certain target such as meeting sales level, reducing the salary which they have to meet within a certain period of time.
Most of the consumers and clients might not believe the young generation leaders because they might not invest in the companies which had been run by young people. Elder leaders are more experienced than the new one so older people will prefer investing into companies which are run by experienced people. For instance, Apple is a world famous company and run by experienced leaders which have a benefit if the public wants to invest in those companies.
Younger people are more energetic which helps the company to accomplish the task in given time which is the key in any business for the success. The new generation managers prefer taking new challenges which are must in any business in order to introduce new ideas in the market. In IT field there are new and emerging leaders who are doing a better job than before which is the best example of emerging leaders.
To sum up, it is up to the public either to trust the new generation leaders who are working hard to make the world better or to rely on the older generation leaders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a benefit' or simply 'benefits'?
Suggestion: a benefit; benefits
...ave major challenges which might create a benefits or drawbacks for the company prosperity...
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Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...hich they have to meet within a certain period of time. Most of the consumers and clients m...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... on the older generation leaders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.915625 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5557533136 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4875 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.9079567358 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 131.083333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095112817895 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422945777969 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024553377437 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586251822154 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226399117015 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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