Every group or company needs one or more leaders, and most of them are older people. Some people think that young people should be leaders. Being a leader requires certain conditions, the most important thing is that they must have certain communication and management skills. Second, they need to be able to lead and guide members to achieve the goals.
Based on the above condition, older people are easier to achieve, because they have extensive work experience and deal with several incidents. Therefore, they can easily understand and grasp the content of the work, as well as set goals and assign work to the appropriate members. Not only the work experience, but they also consist of an amount of personnel experience to have skills to deal with problems and communicate to make thing can run smoothly.
However, the model of society is constantly evolving, and the ideas and ways of doing things of the older generation are still in the old stage. Thus, they cannot catch up with today’s rapidly changing society and missed many opportunities. In contrast, the younger generation is used to being exposed to a new thing that they have a keen sense of and are very capable of seizing opportunities.
In my opinion, regardless of physical strength or not, as long as you have the ability, you can become a leader. If older people are willing to accept new things, and they have enough experience, they will have more chances than younger people. In the same way, teens who have the skills to deal with things can also improve their opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90943396226 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60373530188 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0164025938 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.076923077 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177069319519 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695630771385 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797517604962 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109002979652 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596532238702 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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