People are living the golden age of technology. Therefore, they believe that keeping public libraries open is a total waste of money and changing to use computer is a much better option. In my opinion, I disagree with this idea although it is true that technology has improved significantly.
On the one hand, computers have their own ups and downs. It is undeniable that using a computer or tablet to read books is simpler and more convenient than going to a library. For example, people can find most books online which are also available to read after just a few clicks, regardless to any devices they possess such as Macbook, Amazon Kindle Fire or just regular laptops. Furthermore, when the device is malfunctioned, people may find it very annoying to use. For instance, the users cannot have access to information when internet breaks down or their laptops’ batteries die. So, despite computers offer many advantages, they still cannot fully replace public library.
On the other hand, traditional libraries are still important for individuals. Firstly, these libraries offer a quiet and peaceful atmosphere for books lovers. It is true that people can go to a coffee shop to learn or read book instead but readers will find some annoying noises. But, in the libraries, there are always rules to make complete silence which also make perfect environment for reading books. Secondly, not all individuals are capable to own new devices, even when they can afford good functional computers, they still need to go to the library for the absolute silence. Therefore, maintaining public library is definitely not a waste of money.
In conclusion, I believe public libraries are still essential for people in this computer technology century.
- You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say-When did it happen?-Describe the problem.-Suggest what could be done about it. 70
- Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them? 73
- Today, anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society? 67
- While recruiting a new employee the employer should pay more attention to personal qualities rather than qualification and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 78
- The local government is planning to change the bus timetable. You are not happy about the proposed changes.Write a letter to the newspaper. In the letter•describe the changes•explain how that will affect you•say how you would like the service to be 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14685314685 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76419334157 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0686910193 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179073408809 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681699287665 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812928349058 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128918642791 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387029405793 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.