Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether the developing countries such as Vietnam, Malaysia and Philippines should receive financial support from the outside world or these countries are in need of practical aid and advices from international organizations. In my opinion, I believe the second arguing point is the smarter choice for these nations.
It is true that fund support from international organizations is necessary. In fact, getting a financial help will give the developing countries a good chance to solve their current problems. One big issue that requires a large amount of money is to build facilities which includes houses, schools, hospitals and road system. These facilities are basic demands of the citizens. Another problem to mention is that the leaders of developing nations will also need money to supply the people who are not able to make a living because of their personal conditions or the ones who lose their homes after disastrous storms.
However, financial support cannot help the governments of these countries in the long term. Instead, taking practical aid and advices from the developed nations or organizations is a better idea. Firstly, the governments cannot keep asking for money repeatedly. This action will show that the leaders are incompetent of putting the support in good use and that they are relying on the help from the world. Secondly, by accepting aid and advices, governments can have good knowledges of how to approach their problems. Consequently, they can come up with the solutions by their own efforts. Therefore, this helps these countries to develop in the correct way in the long term.
In conclusion, while it is necessary to ask for financial help, I believe that practical aid and advice provided by international organizations are truly what the developing countries need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27891156463 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88046040664 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537414965986 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1181799089 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.466666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341297475584 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107083060375 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977836652193 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2295072907 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770813503153 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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