These days, the number of people who do not know their neighbours has been increasing and the sense of community is lost. The main reasons are the excessive use of social media and busy competitive life people are facing, but there are ways to solve problems. In this essay, I will discuss those problems.
Firstly, social media is now rapidly developing and are well-known by not only children but also adults. Making friends online boosts an individual's confidence and self-esteem, people usually feel shy and awkward when talking to new friends in virtual life, this happens with those who have a lot to say but hesitate to speak up for fear of rejection and racism and social media minimizes that risk. Social media brings people safe feelings, allows them to express themselves and it becomes easier to make friends or speak up about things they couldn’t speak in real life. Therefore, people preferred making friends through online learning better than talking in front of people. Secondly, people are living an especially busy and competitive life, works are now more competitive that people work more hours and decrease their talking time with neighbours. Children no longer have good times playing with their neighbour’s friends when facing more homework and pressures at school, not only that they have to face but also high expectations on academic levels from their parents. As a result, adults and children are forced to stay at home rather than spending time interacting with their neighbours such as visiting home or having dinner together.
In conclusion, the excessive use of social media and busy competitive life are the main obstacles that lead to less communicating in neighbourhood. However, with community support and a personal will to interact with each other, people can break all these community barriers and create more meaningful relationships with people in their neighbourhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...adults. Making friends online boosts an individuals confidence and self-esteem, people usua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20388349515 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67584510855 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8305816998 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18473676048 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783722778527 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115851878748 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159052389924 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967009124293 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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