Of late, worldwide we notice a fairly increasing trend of the younger generation stepping out of their parents’ home to independently start new lives either on their own or sharing with a friend, after graduation from school. This essay reasons out the positive impact of this lifestyle of early adulthood on society.
We could realize such a lifestyle has a plethora of benefits for both the parents and the younger generation. The young adults after stepping out of the shade of their parents get a chance to explore real-life independently while learning and balancing daily activities like house chores, cleaning, grocery shopping, and financial aspects all by themselves. To support the finances they are provoked to explore different skills and jobs on a part-time or full-time basis as per their needs, thereby inculcating in them a sense of responsibility and instilling in them the value of hard-earned money. This reduces their dependency on parents. It also teaches the importance of time, ethics and discipline of life, which helps them to grow as a mature person. Initially, new situations might seem challenging to them, but towards the end the experience is worth it, to advance self.
While the young ones are busy exploring their new lives, the older generation now gets all the time in the world again for themselves, which they didn’t have for a very long time while their kids were growing up. They have all the time for travel, social activities, learning new hobbies, and so on.
As we know, a man is known by the company he keeps, the people around us do leave an impact on our lives, so parents have to take care during the growing years of their kids, to help them understand and differentiate between right and wrong. This will prevent young adults from falling prey to petty crimes or drug habits, thereby saving themselves from troubles in the future.
Anything and everything comes with pros and cons, it takes a while to adjust to the new course of life. To conclude the negative aspects are outweighed by the positive ones for both parents and children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ethora of benefits for both the parents as well as the younger generation. The young adult...
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Line 2, column 889, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xperience is worth it, to advance self. While the young ones are busy exploring ...
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Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...a man is known by the company he keeps, the people around us do leave an impact on our lives, so par...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91549295775 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66216706937 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580281690141 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4110146635 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26562157742 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816057558675 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651253957428 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142675849188 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691685082238 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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