In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while other consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?
Nowadays, there has been increasing number of young child taking the paid work. We can see this situation in developing countries as well as developed countries. In my opinion there are necessary reasons for young folks to participate work activities and further elaboration are in following paragraphs.
May people holds the opinion that, child labor causes bad things, but in current generation, later age of child are strongly dependent on their parents income and they are wasting their money like the water so to understand the value of money child should start work hence if they will start work then they can earn the money for their pocket money, enjoyment as well as they can decide their life goal and also, it will helpful to get the knowledge of current competitive practical life. The working experience enhance the child’s creative mind and learn the valuable lessons to taking responsibility for their future life.
However, some group of people thinks that, by engaging in the work children are wasting their valuable time for enjoyment and study. We can’t avoid that, many work places are not for the child like production area which are specially for the adults. The environment is also not suitable for the child so the earlier age of child should not start work hence this kind of working experience teach the child how to deal with the difficult situations for the future.
In sum up, I believe that children should engage in some kind of paid work, it makes their future smoother and make them a responsible person to live life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, well, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97718631179 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50055437766 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558935361217 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.785534336 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.444444444 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265580685014 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132472316852 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509749764765 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176123417037 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558920132576 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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