Compulsory military service has long been considered a way for individuals to demonstrate their patriotism towards their country. While there is some truth to this notion, I fundamentally disagree that this is the only or the best way to show loyalty to one's nation.
On the one hand, military service requires a great deal of sacrifice, discipline and courage. By joining the armed forces, individuals are putting their own lives on the line in order to protect their country and its citizens. This act of bravery and selflessness is certainly one way to show patriotism. Moreover, military training can instill values such as duty, honor and discipline, which are important for building a strong and resilient society.
However, it is my belief that there are many other ways in which individuals can demonstrate their love for their country, and that compulsory military service may not be the most appropriate or effective approach for everyone. For instance, some people may have physical or mental health conditions that prevent them from serving in the military, yet they may still be deeply committed to their country and its well-being. Additionally, some individuals may have skills that are better suited for other forms of national service, such as volunteering in their communities, working in healthcare, or providing education to underprivileged youth.
In conclusion, while compulsory military service is certainly one way to show patriotism, it is not the only means of doing so. Individuals should be encouraged to find the best way to serve their country that fits with their own skills and abilities, whether that be through military service, volunteering, or other forms of community service. Ultimately, the goal should be to build a strong, resilient and patriotic society, and there are many paths to achieve this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...only or the best way to show loyalty to ones nation. On the one hand, military se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94413249465 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3528696149 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210880528144 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839808742862 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344388071917 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140772780104 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251816632533 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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