Over the last few years there has been a dramatic increase in the amount of garbage produced by each household. All of this eventually ends up in the landfill. This essay will discuss the two main causes of this issue and will outline several possible solutions to thwart this problem.
Firstly, one of main reason for this issue is the lack of recycling facilities in many nations. Today, governments around the the globe are more concerned about their defence and other external matters, they do not pay a lot of attention to this kind of issues which pollute the environment. Thus, they have no other way but to dumb garbage in landfills. For example, a recent survey found out that, around 70% of waste around the world are not recycled instead they are dumbed in landfills. Another reason for this issue is the lack of awareness among people. Nowadays in many countries, individuals are producing huge amounts of waste without realising the destructive effects these garbage have on our nature. Most of these people do not care about these
issues, so the amount of garbage rises.
Secondly, looking at the possible solutions, one of the best remedy would be to introduce more recycling facilities in countries. In other words, the amount of waste going to the landfills will decrease if recycling or waste processing centres are used. For instance, Japan recycles around 80% of their wastes, as a result they have a clean nature. Another possible solution would be to introduce biodegradable green bags. These bags are highly effective because, in matter of days the soil will degrade these bags, and studies have shown that it has no other side effects to the nature.
To conclude, unless we make a conscious effort, it will not be possible to reduce the amount of waste we produce.
- The pie charts below show electricity generation by source in New Zealand and Germany in 1980 and 2010 78
- The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2002 and projections for 2050 73
- The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 56
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...many nations. Today, governments around the the globe are more concerned about their de...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...many nations. Today, governments around the the globe are more concerned about their de...
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Line 3, column 680, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this garbage' or 'these garbages'?
Suggestion: this garbage; these garbages
...thout realising the destructive effects these garbage have on our nature. Most of these peopl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of these people do not care about these issues, so the amount of garbage rises. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91475409836 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50615796279 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5008116798 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130931876896 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452418751517 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533614602238 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875991135172 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272901865857 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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