The young generation are so far leaving home as part of their degrees or work before marriage. Although, their parents will often feel dispered, they will also gain significant life experiences that will reward them later ln in their carrers. In my opinion, the young are far better off having moved from home to pursuit their dream.
One of the main advantage of leaving home before marriage is that young individuals will havve life experiences that will improve themselves as that would have been otherwise impossible of they had not seperated their parents. Being alone requires people to push themselves beyond the norm into unsually difficult experiences. To illustrate, I had to leave home for university studying in hanoi that makes me to lead an independent life without my parents. I have learned lots of new things from scratch like washing clothes by hand, cooking. Moreover, youth can learn the value of money by doing part time job and managing them reasonable. This kind of management skill is necessary for everyone. Therefore, a new enviroment can provide a positive effect on young single people's career future.
The main challenge that young people will face when no longer stay with parents before marriage usually from their parents. They will often feel dispersed and be left alone. For instance, young individuals get busy with their study and work so they rarely connect with their families. Living away from their beloved can lead to homesick. Sometimes, it is unfortunate to fall sick and parental care is needed. Despite the fact that, they are surrounded by lots of friends, no ome can tale care of them as their parents do.
In conlcusion, leaving home before marriage has been common nowadays. While the young will no doubt experience homesick and their parents will feel lonely, it is infact these obstacles that lead to the main advantge which is life experiences and other useful skills. Despite these barriers, the benefits that the young gains will be much more benefical for me.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Rahi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: part-time
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...friends, no ome can tale care of them as their parents do. In conlcusion, leavi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, kind of, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02388059701 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49296805644 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570149253731 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4930197769 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5789473684 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24639401728 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754478325877 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585021559647 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156533972044 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670613108214 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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