In many countries, people are having health issue. this is due to their unhealthy living. What are the reason of people choosing unhealthy lifestyle? What can be done to solve this problem?
In the contemporary epoch, unhealthy living has been a prevailing concern in the significant past of the world. A sea change was witnessed unhealthy leaving in the past. The following paragraph's would explain possible reasons for the problem and propose a handful of remedial measure.
To begin with the reasons, firstly, today, people are like machines running for money and luxurious living. Therefore, they did not have time to care for their health this lead to health diseases. For example, people less care about exercise daily because they don't have time for that and not keep up diet that leads to heart, cancer etc diseases. As a result, they becomes fat and look more sick and become more older than their age. In addition, eating habit were changed than past. people nowadays, begins to consume junk food then healthy.
Undoubtedly, every lock has a key, similarly, some solution should also be implemented. first solution, people have to stop working more hour and take ample breaks during work. hence, they can take good care of their health and have time for exercise regularly. For instance, if anyone work 8 hours and exercise 1 hours regularly that is enough to him to lead a healthy and sound life. Adding further, eating habits also need to change. they should always try to eat foods which is healthy and hygienic for their health and prevent their body from causing health diseases.
For conclusion, I would like to state that, we need to step forward more about taking good care of our health for living a healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'become'
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Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
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Suggestion: First
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Suggestion: Hence
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Suggestion: They
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Suggestion:
...f our health for living a healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, look, similarly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92015209125 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33115510952 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7900526753 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.875 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172091871121 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561958033836 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435094879413 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933123539033 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452787259347 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.