In many countries plastic bags are the main source of rubbish causing pollution to oceans and on land, therefore they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental pollution has become a serious threat to the earth in the last few decades. Certain demographics hold the statement that plastic bags shouldn’t be permitted to use anymore as they are the main reason for land and marine pollution. I completely agree with the assertion as their decomposition is quite slower than other garbage stuff like paper and cotton.
First and foremost, plastic bags are contaminating the earth. They are manufactured by different hazardous chemicals which remain for a long period inside the layers of the planet and reduce the enrichment of soil or contaminate the ocean by reacting to different minerals. Consequently, agricultural produce and marine life are in danger. Rather illustrative examples are Indian and Pakistani beaches where people recklessly throw plastic bags on the beaches during their visits which ultimately flow back through the waves inside the water. There is no coincidence that there is noticeably less sea life around the beaches of these countries. There is a possibility that life can be back on these shores if people would stop using these anti-environmental shopping bags.
On a further note, these bags are hard to decompose. They are not composed of natural elements but artificial chemicals. Therefore, municipality departments spend millions of dollars every year for their recycling and decomposition as it’s their responsibility to clean the cities from such pollutants. They spend this money from tax amount of taxpayers which could be used in more productive ways such as green city projects, social awareness to avoid possible pollution causing acts. Banning plastic bags can bring a positive impact around the world as it would eliminate land and marine pollution and make the earth more natural and healthy.
The conclusion to be drawn is that many pollution problems can be sorted out by prohibiting the use of plastic bags. Land and ocean will be clean and feasible for agricultural produce and marine life. It would bring an overall positive impact on the life of the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28787878788 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89572212264 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4936082976 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.647058824 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207306049222 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621303001747 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560570017184 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132368098496 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033338032779 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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