In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
In numerous countries, the educational institutions are facing extreme issue of misbehaviour from students.
reason for this alarming situation varies. this essay will first discuss the mentioned problem and then desired solution will be suggested to mitigate it.
To begin with, one of the most contingent reasons is the modern way of parenting. parents believe in one size fits for all strategy. Whereas, not every child can be raised in a similar way. Moreover, parents are now too busy with their jobs schedules and parties thus, neglecting their major role as a mentor. consequently, children are not supervised properly. secondly, technology has played main role in shaping anti behaviour of students. For instance, Violent games such as GTA voice city, children exposure to every kind of misleading information on the internet make them vulnerable to misbehave. Thirdly, In some cases, students may hold this behaviour because they live in an environment, where such behaviour is the norm.
To address this problem multiple solutions can be proposed. first and foremost parents should not underestimate the significance of their guidance for proper brought up of a child. secondly, a course on social behaviour must be added to the curriculum of all primary and secondary schools. Last but not least, there must be enforcement of law about the stuff accessibility on the internet at all levels.
To conclude, children misbehaviour is on rife. which nowadays is growing concern of both parents and teachers. there are, however, number of ways that can be used to ease the severity of this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, for instance, kind of, such as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30739299611 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85779057119 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645914396887 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2513807381 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7777777778 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2777777778 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61111111111 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152467742131 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043394577559 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527535337811 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809987408968 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273817046373 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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