At present, the majority of nations are concern about increasing misbehavior by their pupils at school and universities. Undoubtedly, the lack of parental advice and modernization is the root of why students are becoming rude and aggressive. However, like any other issue, this complex problem can also be tackle.
The foremost reason is, the lack of parental advice because modernization made both parents busier than ever before. As a result, parents are failing to teach their offspring how to behave in general, which leads to disrespect, to teachers and other students at school. Furthermore, a vast distance between parents and students could generate adverse effects on students' minds. For example, in 2015, The Indian Educational Council (TIEC) found out that,1 out of 3 students whose father and mother are full-time employees, tend to oppose school rules frequently, as compared to 1 out of 8 in 1989. In addition, advancements in technology, such as mobile phones and computers, have a detrimental effect on students' attitudes.
Of course, parental advice and spending valuable time with children could result in a humongous improvement in behavior. Besides parents, teachers should also need to show some kindness toward students as that can strengthen the bond of the teacher-student. Moreover, it is true that modern technology has tremendous advantages to society, though, some majors should be taken before giving permission to students. For example, the Korean government strictly band the use of mobile phones for under 19 pupils.
To summarise, I would not underestimate the concern of students' behavior as they are future of the blue planet. Therefore, it is important that every parents and teacher tackle this situation with very politeness. In parallel, authorities should have to pass strong legislation toward electronic use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in general, of course, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48083623693 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9736507109 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637630662021 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5443984395 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.866666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129892959951 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432525281346 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288482799321 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819567970651 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018474690665 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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